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The Quest

Only the purest of hearts may follow
    Blindly she walks feeling her way
       All of life's burdens so heavy they lay
           Trying to fill up a heart that is hollow

Copyright © Sharon Ruebel | Year Posted 2011

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/23/2011 2:31:00 PM Hello, Sharon, hope your quest finds what it's looking for.. sure enjoyed the wonderful way you shared the task of our hearts.. have a nice day,..p.d. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/21/2011 5:13:00 PM Wonderful work, Sharon. Always very interesting and enjoyable reads. This reminds me a song which goes something like this...."...holding her candle that went out long ago..." sad but we are urged to keep trying... Have a wonderful weekend! Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/19/2011 7:43:00 PM Great example of enclosed rhyme, sweetie! Leaves me wanting to hear more about her. Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 1/19/2011 1:28:00 AM A soft heart warming write dear poet ! "Cast your burdens to the Lord, he shall sustain you !" Have a fantastic day Sharon ! much love, james Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/18/2011 10:21:00 PM beautiful Sharon, just beautiful. Harry Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/18/2011 11:16:00 AM Amazing enclosed rhyme Shar. Thank you for your kind comments today. Love, Carol Login to Reply