Charles Messina Poet Verse

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Example for my contest. (9-lines, 9-syllables) abab, abab, c

The Queen of Day

Beheld, the warmth that softens my face 
Whilst in the coolness that brisk my nose 
Ere, the queen of day, comforts my space 
Like petals fragrance; a healthy rose 

Freckles; suns beckon - hidden in dark 
Tanning or Redding on pale white skin
Gorgeous this day...shall thy walk the park
I am king...this glorious mornin' 

My presence makes my painting...Perfect!

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Anisha Dutta September 29, 2019 at 10:49 PM YES. A Gorgeous Day. Good Example to follow.

Connie Marcum Wong September 29, 2019 at 5:15 PM Another beautiful example for your contest Charlie. I love the personalisation with the sun. : )

Carolyn Devonshire September 28, 2019 at 12:15 PM Indeed, a glorious day, Charlie! And a great example for your contest too. (My sister tells e the weather is very nice now in NJ.) Thanks for this uplifting poem! Hugs, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop September 18, 2019 at 4:25 PM Beautiful poem..Enjoyed reading.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 12:31 PM - I haven't checked out your new contest yet ... many thanks for my 1st place in your contest, Charlie - Thanks for a great example for the new one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)