The Queen of Day

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Example for my contest. (9-lines, 9-syllables) abab, abab, c

Beheld, the warmth that softens my face Whilst in the coolness that brisk my nose Ere, the queen of day, comforts my space Like petals fragrance; a healthy rose Freckles; suns beckon - hidden in dark Tanning or Redding on pale white skin Gorgeous this day...shall thy walk the park I am king...this glorious mornin' My presence makes my painting...Perfect!

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/29/2019 10:49:00 PM

YES. A Gorgeous Day. Good Example to follow.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/29/2019 5:15:00 PM

Another beautiful example for your contest Charlie. I love the personalisation with the sun. : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/28/2019 12:15:00 PM

Indeed, a glorious day, Charlie! And a great example for your contest too. (My sister tells e the weather is very nice now in NJ.) Thanks for this uplifting poem! Hugs, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2019 4:25:00 PM

Beautiful poem..Enjoyed reading.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2019 12:31:00 PM

- I haven't checked out your new contest yet ... many thanks for my 1st place in your contest, Charlie - Thanks for a great example for the new one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)