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The Puzzle of Life

Sometimes you just can't Find that last piece of the puzzle And you just have to make The picture work without it

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Date: 8/30/2009 6:42:00 PM

So much truth in this poem shared in a creative way. There is a lot of depth in just four lines. You certainly made the most of them. Keep on writing! Karen

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/23/2009 3:22:00 PM

sometimes you have to look out side the box. jhl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/13/2009 10:49:00 AM

When the pieces of the puzzle don't come together, it is fun to try and make "The picture work without it." In fact, I have always loved puzzles that allow us to fill in the blanks. (You should hear the way I fill in song lyrics when I can't understand the words that are sung.) Great fun reading this insightful poem, Jen! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2009 7:52:00 AM

Wow Jen this is amazing. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/13/2009 7:12:00 AM

very insightful, I can definitely relate

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2009 6:46:00 AM

Thoughtfulness put to pen. Keep writing. Sara