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The Puzzle

the puzzle that’s life~ 
gathered bits and pieces
fitting more or less



AP: Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2022

growing upintrospectionlifeperspectivesenryu

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James Inman

April 2, 2020 at 11:15 AM

A lovely write Line

Line Gauthier

April 2, 2020 at 2:50 PM

Thanks, James.

Caren Krutsinger

March 8, 2020 at 5:05 AM

I want to grab this idea and run with it, but now it would seem like stealing.

Line Gauthier

March 8, 2020 at 6:22 AM

Not at all, Caren! It's called inspiration! People do it all the time and mention their source.

Peter W Iversen

March 4, 2020 at 2:15 PM

Great read. Most (like me) always have a few pieces missing. Peter

Line Gauthier

March 4, 2020 at 6:33 PM

LOL And I thought I was bad not playing with a full deck. Thanks for your visit and comment, Peter.

Panagiota Romios

March 4, 2020 at 2:00 PM

Great Senryu Line Panagiota xx

Line Gauthier

March 4, 2020 at 6:33 PM

Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

Jenish Somadas

March 4, 2020 at 2:59 AM

One frame at a time.. Bits of happiness fixed so fast.. But those of sorrows searching so long.. Wonderful thought Line..

Line Gauthier

March 4, 2020 at 7:30 AM

Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.

John Watt

March 3, 2020 at 11:55 PM

One v-e-r-y s-l-o-w frame at a time... a well captured truism of growing up, with the perfect metaphor, a puzzle. Love this, Line ~ John

Line Gauthier

March 4, 2020 at 12:56 AM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, John.

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