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Glacier releases a drop of water Flowing upon bosom of Mother Earth Separation births power of prayer Karmic journey is long, with no waiver Conflicting emotions entwine at birth Glacier releases a drop of water Fearless traveller melds with the river Low self-esteem and feeling lack of worth Separation births power of prayer Safe in dark depths, heights bereft of shelter Brave drop vaporises to take rebirth Glacier releases a drop of water In timeless time, this soul becomes purer One with the flow, joyous in bubbling mirth Separation births power of prayer Mere actor on stage, God the director Now grown is girth of this humble stalwart Glacier releases a drop of water Separation births power of prayer 04-July-2021

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Date: 7/4/2021 7:51:00 AM
This is a splendid villanelle. Wish I could write them as good as you.
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Date: 7/4/2021 8:26:00 AM
Villanelle is an interesting format but I prefer Quatern more

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