John Loving Iii Poet I do not know?

The Purple Heart

Radiant are the words 
that painted your existance
Shinning are the details
swept with lyrical rhymes
Brightly sewn were intentions
that bless us day and night
A tapestry of beauty
in heart shapes and designs
A glowing presence expressing love
made of it's own light
Hopes that peddle effortlessly
that never wains or tires
Happy and content
circleing it's beautiful fire
Sparks sparkling words of care
Rainbow colours here and there
Stars that twinkle in the night
small white unageable lights
That lights above the perfect night
Just before the perfect day
I like the way 
you decorated my heart
I really can't discribe 
this kind of art
Colours are made to 
dazzle the eyes
But what you've given 
also pleases the blind
Rhyme and rythem
do not account for the deaf
But lives feel those
certian depths
I stand in awe
of your beautiful delights
Close my eyes
and say good night

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Phyllis Babcock March 18, 2014 at 7:07 PM Nicely written John. Now off to watch the voice on tv. Comments will have to wait for another day.. love phyl

Dinda Minardi November 21, 2013 at 10:00 PM this is wonderful.. thanks for stopping by at my page, John.

Mark Peterson November 21, 2013 at 1:11 PM John, the intensity and flow of your poem strengthen its many messages and convey aching regard for your words. Especially pleasing the blind and rhythm and rhyme and the deaf. All so poetic, master of the art.

Charlotte Puddifoot November 17, 2013 at 6:04 PM is this the one? well, you certainly injected some colour into it...balm to my heart and soul (soup mail)

Toquyen Harrell November 17, 2013 at 5:59 PM You are trying to describe the feeling of adoration. Super job, John. Enjoyed :).

Johnny Rhinem November 16, 2013 at 9:18 PM Ps., Stopping Back By As Forgetting To Mention Unto Your Gifted Bard, A Beautiful Favourite ˜ Stay Cool!

Johnny Rhinem November 16, 2013 at 8:59 PM † I Like This Seeming Shotgun Verse In Possibilities Unto Multiple Lights Which May Touch Your Heart ? A Bit Of Abstract When Viewed From Such His Kaleidoscope Be Love, My Dear Old Friend, John ˜ Many Things Are Beyound Myself, Yet, I Too Am Just Waiting For These Eyes To Be Opened While Nursing This Bottle Called Time ˜ Cheers, We Shout And Let There Be Light * A Companion Unto Both, 'HIS' Love As Truth ˜ Very Beautiful Your Painting! Thank You For The Visit And Happy Holidays ˜ Love John

Cherl Dunn November 16, 2013 at 3:06 PM Written with purities beauty, and no disguise on the way you feel towards this special person. bravo my friend and thanks for your comment on i am his. cheri

Terry O'Leary November 15, 2013 at 5:46 PM This is splendid! Love it... Terry (and thans for all your kind comments) John Loving Iii November 16, 2013 at 12:54 AM Actually Terry you inspired this piece but it went in a different direction. I planned an epic like yours but certain people were demanding romance.

Harry Horsman November 12, 2013 at 4:44 PM This is so good John, look forward to the continuation...