The Pure Beauty of Feelings Within

here I am walking along the beach
on the Scottish west side by the coast
just taking in all the sounds and smells
such a lovely sensation one can boast

Listen to waves crash over your feet
so refreshing feeling go through you
as the salt water tingles your toes
wish this could be eternally ever new

The sun is beating down on you
feel it's rays over from head to feet
it burns upon your skin so warmly
this is simple such a pure treat

Now walking upon the sandy beach
feel the slight breeze through my hair
my breath tangles with the wind
this is so beautiful and so rare

Oh Scotland is so sweet in the sun
the nature evidence of its beauty run
a picture to grace any historical hall
what a privilege so mightily stands tall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Williams Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Beautifully written
Williams Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 12:51 PM
Indeed a pleasant surprise. Happy writing! x
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November 2, 2024 at 12:28 PM
Thanks Julianne, Glad you thought so highly of this piece, so pleasing to meet a fellow Briit on PS, I'm North of the border and been writing for a good few years. I look forward to reading your writings, have a great weekend, Gordon
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