The Proposal

Hold me here
Right here. Right now
I'll keep you close
And kiss your brow

Take my hand
And don't let go
I understand
The things you know

I'll kiss the tears
That you will cry
I'll calm your fears
I'll make you sigh

I need you now
I'll stay with you
I'll show you that
My heart beats true

Your fragilness
I can not miss
Your tenderness
Is in your kiss

You keep me sane
You make me whole
Your love remains
Deep in my soul

I'll take your love
Into my life
Make me yours
And be my wife


Rockman  :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/10/2012 12:27:00 PM
This was beautiful Rockman! Another gem ...Samia
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Date: 7/30/2011 7:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading again. Feels good. Soup mail
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:08:00 PM
lol, well.....you certainly got all the girls to come a' lookin' on this write.... nice work Rockman, I'm truly enjoying the time reading your works...
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Date: 7/17/2011 11:02:00 AM
If this was very romantic. It is nice to know that there are still men in the world that can feel their emotions and express them. By the way I never found your e-mail but would love some good pointers. I am very new to this but find it to be a good way to let out my feelings. I will read the rest of your poems.
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Date: 7/14/2011 9:58:00 PM
Oh my.... hope she said YES! Great write!
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Date: 7/11/2011 12:21:00 PM
love this...romantic.
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:59:00 AM
love it,..Linda,..p.d.
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Date: 7/10/2011 3:44:00 PM
Always interested in what you have to say about love and the variety of ways you say it! Great verse - I enjoyed.
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