The Promotion

I got a big promotion
I supervise my crew
I'm the one who leads them
And tells them what to do

We tear down vacant houses
So new buildings can be built
Nobody ever lives there
So, we're never filled with guilt

The first house that we worked on
Was such a big surprise
This beautiful house stood empty
I could hardly believe my eyes

The yard was filled with flowers
It even had a swing
A dinner bell was on the porch
I could almost hear it ring

A smile came across my face
As a tear rolled down my cheek
To destroy all these memories
Truly made me weak

An oil stain in the driveway
Where a truck would sometimes sit
A patio in the backyard
Where the grill was often lit

There was even a swimming pool
Where the kids could all get wet
Truly, a place of happiness
That no one could forget

Asking me to tear this down
Was more than I could give
For this is where I grew up
The place I used to live

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/10/2010 4:35:00 PM
This is so moving. I really loved reading this poem, I had a little chill by the end. Nice Write. ~ KC
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Date: 3/10/2010 3:01:00 PM
enjoyed reading today
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