The Promised Land

No matter the country we were born in We're all inhabitants of earth Maybe ashamed to admit it sometimes Our much treasured place of birth Since time began we've battled each other For what I haven't a clue Just look around at the beauty you see An astounding vista we view Is there something this old guy is missing Am I alone in my love of living Am I a lonely voice in the wilderness This land is so forgiving We abuse it and misuse it every damn day This God given paradise we share Disgusting behaviour is being exhibited Destroying our planet without care Certainly not fair for us peace loving souls Our cries for love go unheeded But surely we shouldn't give up the fight Some common decency is needed Maybe before my day is finally done Paradise will finally be at hand When all good people of our dear planet earth Will as one each treasure this land

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Date: 6/20/2023 12:39:00 PM
Lovely message sent here my friend...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/20/2023 1:39:00 PM
I will read...
Date: 6/19/2023 8:01:00 PM
So much truth in this, Jack! an excellent write! Blessings, Kim M
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/20/2023 1:34:00 AM
Dear Kim thank you for your kind words... much appreciated again!!! XOX
Date: 6/19/2023 2:39:00 PM
oh Jack I am so much more used to your witty limericks, this is such a touching and thought provoking piece, hugs jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/19/2023 5:00:00 PM
More limericks coming! LOL Love from Canada XOX
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2023 3:26:00 PM
I will be setting up a poopy limerick contest - hope you will join in the fun - limericks rule as does humour - need more of both in our lives jack xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/19/2023 3:11:00 PM
Hello Jan! Limericks rule! They have always been a go-to form!!! Dear Jan hope all is going well with you... love from Canada XOXOX
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