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The Promise of Morning

Cream clouds my coffee the steam rises like whispers from a wishing well 9th Place 7 Line Max Contest Sponsor: Rick Parise Submitted 6/1/17

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Date: 6/3/2017 3:38:00 AM
As with Haiku, I love poems that say the most with the least, and this is charmingly whimsical and joyous, Dale ... congrats! Love it!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/3/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Greg.
Date: 6/2/2017 10:26:00 PM
I will take a cup! Congrats!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/3/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thanks, Kim!
Date: 5/31/2017 5:11:00 PM
Well crafted and carefully selected lines.
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Date: 5/31/2017 4:38:00 PM
oh gosh Dale this is gorgeous!! Into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/31/2017 4:41:00 PM
Thanks, jan. I always appreciate your comments. fave away!
Date: 5/31/2017 4:32:00 PM
Really nice. A great morning poem my friend.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/31/2017 4:43:00 PM
Thanks, chris. I always look forward to that first cup.

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