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The Promise

The gleaming of the sun on the snow in the winter
Teases your eyes with the rays – Squinter
Pupils dilate, taking in the glorious fluffy whiteness
The eye can see the vastness

The wind howls, deceived by the coldness
In one big gulp, it swallows a drift in its boldness
Survival hides beneath the mound of white
To emerge when it is time – excite

Life flows and ebbs, even in the stillness
Birds pecking in the chillness, so relentless
No leaves, no shelter from the storm
Side by side on a fragile branch – uniform

The game of life, so fragile from birth
When the snow melts, there is a rebirth
Tiny wings and baby steps – towards
Marching to the beat of another day – forward

Breathing,
Living,
Loving,
Trusting
In another tomorrow
The promise of a future you borrow

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Date: 1/7/2025 7:42:00 AM
Your piece expresses the essence of life beautifully. Your last line speaks volumes.
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Lise Clendening
Date: 1/7/2025 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Franci!

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