The Promise

For years my mom was my best friend
Through thick and thin I'd helped her mend
Her every need and want I'd tend
Vowed I'd stay until the end

And by her side both day and night
Not one moment out of sight
Cried and sang and held her tight
Praying she would be alright

The promise I would not forsake
Watching every breath she'd take
Fighting through my own heartbreak
Of knowledge that she'd never wake

The last thing we would ever share
She finally knew and was aware 
The depth of just how much I care
How loved she was cause I was there.

Written by,
Sheri Lynne Evans
June 5, 2020
7:26 p.m.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 6/10/2020 12:52:00 PM
No better tribute than a devoted daughter tending to her devoted mother. Sigh. The best of the human race. FAVE! Thanks, Sheri. Blessings, Gershon
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Sheri Evans
Date: 6/11/2020 4:26:00 AM
Thankyou very much as this holds so much emotion for me. Appreciate your support always. Stay safe!
Date: 6/7/2020 12:36:00 PM
This is a beautiful tribute to your Mom, Sheri, and she was blessed to have you by her side. I know how much you must miss her, my heart goes out to you. John
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Sheri Evans
Date: 6/7/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thankyou for your kind words as I am having a hard time here in this house alone and those were words that just poured out that night. I appreciate you very much.
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