The Promise

Hold me and comfort me.
Come to me when I call.
With your arms, embrace me.
Please don't let me fall!

You are my true Deliverer. 
My loving best Friend.
In my heart will You be forever
and I know Your love for me will never end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Orozco Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 12:41 PM
So full of passion! Nicely written- darkpoet
Torres Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 1:46 PM
This is Beautiful Brandee. Excellent write full of love Michael
Mc Avatar
October 24, 2008 at 11:04 PM
classy and divine! adore it!!
Degenhardt Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 12:06 PM
The promise reads as if it was the Covenent, which I believe it to be. This flows so well and is a lovely sign of faith and love. Michael
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