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Written 20th December 2024
There was a shepherd who fell sound asleep So there was no one to tend to his sheep The sheep were delighted, freedom at last Followed the leader and ran from the past. Walking for miles over fields, hills and moor The sheep were excited, as never before Then came the sunset and the night grew dim They began to feel that freedom was grim. They became hungry, went searching for food But couldn't find forage and became subdued Unable to lie down, they couldn’t sleep As they were pursued by some ghastly beasts. Tired and weary the sheep so wished to be Back in the flock and the hand of safety They realised they need their shepherd's care For love, food and shelter that's always there. When the sheep had almost lost every hope A familiar face came over the slopes It was their shepherd and all ran with glee To reunite with him, most thankfully. They vowed they'd never run away again Wasn't worth the havoc, sorrow or pain Then the tired hungry sheep with baa-baa bleats Thanked God for shepherds who watch o'er their fleece.

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Date: 2/14/2025 11:46:00 AM
Beryl, I read this before and loved it. I had thought I commented but I guess I was so taken by the plight of the sheep, I got distracted! This has a lot to say about learning through experience. Making a mistake is supposedly the best driver of learning. Smiles!!
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Date: 12/21/2024 10:29:00 AM
Hi sister Beryl, was this the poem that you entered in the contest, a certain winner in my book. xx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/21/2024 7:05:00 PM
Not enterered in any contest brother John, and never will be, only you know why… Sis Beryl
Date: 12/21/2024 8:41:00 AM
Love your take on the prodigal son story, I was going to mention it and noticed Michael thought the same. Well written Beryl. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/21/2024 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Tom, I never thought of using the ‘Prodical Sheep’ as a title… Beryl
Date: 12/20/2024 8:14:00 PM
Love the ending Beryl it sounds very much like the Prodigal Son story. Love the sheep version. thank you so much for sharing...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/20/2024 8:24:00 PM
Thank you Michael for reading and commenting, never thought of this being about Prodical Sheep. I appreciate all your support… Beryl

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