Hannah Borke Poet Rhyme

The Problem With Your Poems

The problem with your poems is
You’re one of many whizzes
Sitting on a hoard
of brilliant gems obscured;
For we can not read them all
Nor the crop on Fall;
Thus they’ll gather dust
But write them, ‘cause you must!

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Jan Allison March 20, 2022 at 4:07 PM Hannah, this poem is cream of the crop so glad I popped by today, Ive not been active on soup lately am hoping my muse is back now:-) hugs Jan xx Hannah Borke June 10, 2022 at 9:00 AM Thanks. If people wouldn’t have to work for a living or filled up on whatever mundane tasks, more poems would get read.

Gershon Wolf November 27, 2019 at 1:01 PM I guess that perhaps this s a better problem to have than a bevy of 'sluggish' poems. LOL. Interesting ink, methinks! :) gw Hannah Borke June 10, 2022 at 9:00 AM Thanks.

Line Gauthier November 10, 2019 at 3:03 PM That is a problem. Well penned, Hannah. Hannah Borke November 10, 2019 at 3:44 PM It’s completely unfair. Every other type of talent gets due fuss. (This topic excludes me, because I’m not a poet.)

Silent One November 10, 2019 at 1:26 PM This is really good... Enjoyed your satirical write.. Hannah Borke November 10, 2019 at 1:36 PM Thanks for your comment. Satire not intended. So much great poetry, we can hardly scratch the surface.