The Problem

She wasn't selfish enough,
That was the problem.
She would think about it often,
Sometimes she even made plans. 
Seldomly she'd even start to prepare. 
Though she never took the last step. 
She wasn't selfish enough.
That was the problem.

She wasn't selfish enough,
That was the problem.
Once, she had thought it through.
Once, she had made the plans. 
Once, she had finished the preparations. 
Once, she had taken all but the last step.
But she wasn't selfish enough.
And that was the problem. 

She wasn't selfish enough, 
That was the problem.
The thought of family and friends,
it always stopped her. 
She didin't want to make them suffer.
So insted she kept on suffering. 
She wasn't selfish enough. 
And that was the problem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 26, 2015 at 1:29 AM
Viktoria, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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April 22, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Thank you for your review.
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April 22, 2015 at 1:58 PM
I love this, same effect just like a Nordic thunder.
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September 7, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Thanks
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April 22, 2015 at 8:42 AM
- Hello Sverige and Viktoria :)- I want to welcome you to the P-Soup - You have come to the right place, here you will find many talented poets :) - Share your work, try two get some "poets" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 21, 2015 at 10:21 PM
Viktoria, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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