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The Price

ashen is the color of your Holy face bruised and bloody where the stripes left their trace upon a back so strong and fair leaving bloody scars from lashes so unfair you were stripped of all Your dignity for all of mankind's iniquities to pay a price You did not owe all because You love us so then they thrust upon Your brow a tightly woven thorny crown as the blood ran down Your face still You continued to give us grace dragging Your cross through the rough streets to hang with nails thru hands and feet upon a hill called Golgotha for societies worst in attempt to strip You of all Your worth all through the strife and all of the pain not one time did You complain for a price that must be paid all for our sins and wicked ways so we may all be forgiven and take our place up in Heaven with the One who paid the ultimate price to give to us eternal life I have so little to give in return except my life for what it is worth certainly not the price You paid hardly seems a fair trade if You will exept my humble heart I will certainly try to do my part to make all those around me see how awesome life with You can be Thank You Lord for Your undying love

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Date: 4/21/2009 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations TuLisha on this deeply spiritual write "The Price" being featured. Vince
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Date: 4/20/2009 8:48:00 PM
Tulisha, Congrats on having your poem featured!
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Date: 4/20/2009 8:17:00 PM
Tulisha, it's an uplifting and inspiring poem, deserving to be featured. Iove it my friend. Mine is also featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/20/2009 7:20:00 PM
Yes Lord Thank You for Your undying love-Beautiful-Thanks for remaining me of his love for us all... Congratulations on htis poem being featured this wek... RKay-Check mine out-The Wooden Cross-He lives
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Date: 4/20/2009 3:45:00 PM
Congrats on an excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/20/2009 2:43:00 PM
Your poem is a beautiful witness to our Lord. God bless you. Congratulations on your being featured this week... Always, Dane
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Date: 4/20/2009 1:11:00 PM
Thank you for sharing the Easter message in a new and creative way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Blessings to you. Wishing you ongoing success with our writing. Karen
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Date: 4/20/2009 9:15:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your faith, TuLisha. Welcome to PoetrySoup and congratulations on your writing being selected to be featured this week!!
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Date: 4/20/2009 4:33:00 AM
Congrats to you, Tulisha, on your inspiring poem being featured this week! Cheers, Ernesto
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:22:00 PM
TuLisha, nice work and congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:47:00 AM
TuLisha - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 3/28/2009 5:13:00 PM
THANK YOU AND ONLY GOD DID WRITE IT, FOR HE CONTROLS MY PEN. THANK ALL OF YOU WHO TOOK THE TIME TO READ AND COMMENT ON MY PIECE. GOD BLESS YALL
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Date: 3/28/2009 2:50:00 PM
Dear TuLisha: Love your take on Christ, and his crucification. Very inspiring, and really well written. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 3/28/2009 5:37:00 AM
HALLELUJAH & PRAISE GOD! A beautifully, well written and heartfrlt poem! I thank you so much for sharing this with us all. I pray for people to read and acknowledge through your poem, the love that the Lord has for us all! May God continue to bless you! And thank you for the lovely comment about my featured poem. Love Janice
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Date: 3/27/2009 5:55:00 PM
thank yall so much. It is not me but He who controls my pen. God Bless yall
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:42:00 PM
What a lovely piece of art you've here, bravo! Welcome to soupland! Ernesto
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:42:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to Jesus Christ our lord. Welcome to the soup. Kirstie
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Date: 3/27/2009 12:37:00 PM
Amen! Blessings to you for sharing this faith message with us. Fitting for the season. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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