The Present is too Fleeting

The present is too fleeting invaded by the past impinging on the future Not made to last

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 2/25/2024 8:28:00 PM

It seems to go faster the older we become. ancient Old Duck, lol.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/25/2024 8:34:00 PM

It 'shirley' does... I see that you are now 'ancient Old Duck.' Are you trying to compete with that young Congresswoman they call 'AOC?!' lol. Thanks, Shirley.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/23/2024 1:43:00 PM

well said, Gershon! Liked it!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/25/2024 8:35:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara.

John Lawless

Date: 2/23/2024 5:43:00 AM

check the expiration date....well.....have lunch before...or after..or in -between

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/25/2024 8:35:00 PM

Just can't find a date, John ~ Fig Newton, Isaac's great-great-great-great-great-fruitcake