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The Presence

The heavens smile bright upon the pristine landscape... God's tranquility. For "Power in Observation" contest sponsored by John Freeman.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/1/2011 3:41:00 PM

This haiku is beautiful, George. I'm sorry I'm so late in offering congratulations. Been ill and my time on the computer is limited. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2011 7:58:00 PM

yes, what an awesome landscape it must have been ,.. thanks for sharing your wonderful haiku. Enjoy your day,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 4:30:00 PM

Congrats George on another splendid win with awesome words that ignite luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 4:30:00 PM

Congrats George on another splendid win with awesome words that ignite luv..

Edwin Baldwin

Date: 7/23/2011 9:32:00 AM

Congratulations George!!! Starting at the top of the winners list, and working my way down to here. I find this haiku to be absolutely perfect in every detail...

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/22/2011 10:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, George. HUGS....

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/22/2011 10:29:00 AM

My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John, George

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2011 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in John Moses Freeman's contest "Power Of Observation" George. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 7/22/2011 8:14:00 AM

George, Also with graces provided, you did well in gracing the sponsor. Congratulations on your second place! Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2011 9:33:00 AM

so well rendered by your graceful pen, george... winning's best! :)huggs, nette

Judy Ball

Date: 7/18/2011 10:07:00 PM

Oh nice. There is nothing quite like being able to sit in His presence. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2011 2:20:00 PM

Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and wishing me luck in the contest..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2011 12:13:00 PM

a blessed write George.. powerful lines create ambiance luv.. good luck in the contest.. precious piece..