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The Presence

The heavens smile bright
upon the pristine landscape...
God's tranquility.


For "Power in Observation" contest sponsored by John Freeman.

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Carolyn Devonshire

August 1, 2011 at 3:41 PM

This haiku is beautiful, George. I'm sorry I'm so late in offering congratulations. Been ill and my time on the computer is limited. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

July 23, 2011 at 7:58 PM

yes, what an awesome landscape it must have been ,.. thanks for sharing your wonderful haiku. Enjoy your day,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 23, 2011 at 4:30 PM

Congrats George on another splendid win with awesome words that ignite luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 23, 2011 at 4:30 PM

Congrats George on another splendid win with awesome words that ignite luv..

Edwin Baldwin

July 23, 2011 at 9:32 AM

Congratulations George!!! Starting at the top of the winners list, and working my way down to here. I find this haiku to be absolutely perfect in every detail...