The Predator

I lurk in the darkness as I wait
My victim unknowingly enters the gate
This day has been coming for so long
Only one shot, I can't get it wrong
I hear the key turn, so I start to rise
The light flicks on, And I yell "SURPRISE!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 12:35 PM
I enjoyed reading your terriffic poetry today Marshall. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol
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September 29, 2011 at 5:15 PM
was it a good surprise? light & love
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