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The Predator

I lurk in the darkness as I wait My victim unknowingly enters the gate This day has been coming for so long Only one shot, I can't get it wrong I hear the key turn, so I start to rise The light flicks on, And I yell "SURPRISE!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/30/2011 12:35:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your terriffic poetry today Marshall. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2011 5:15:00 PM
was it a good surprise? light & love
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