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The Power of Death

Locked Inside the real person is affraid to face all the lies and scars that i have made lost and betraid i walk alone my muted thoughts become unknown i hear a voice the piercing words which linger in my head my heart is beating but there is no pulse and i feel like im already dead with a razor i connect the stars which leaves the patterns of my scars and the pain in my heart kills the desire to love as i watch myself burn in the fire my heart starts to ake as i lye there awake and the memoreies replay as i slowly decay the fire burned out and left nothing but coal as they cast the power of death on my soul.. -Spencer Coggsdale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2011 6:07:00 AM
This is masterfully haunting, brilliant
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Date: 1/27/2011 3:52:00 AM
nice
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Date: 1/26/2011 3:56:00 AM
really liked this peice it flows well the grammer and content are very good and well done on being featured my friend keep writing
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week Spencer. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2011 4:46:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 1/20/2011 6:19:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Spencer. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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