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The Portrait

No one has ever plunged in to her loneliness purging the moss of yesteryears sealed false promises on unquenched lips ploughed bedsheets mapping the maze of lust tears swept eyelashes coarse broken bangles on the mirror oozing days and nights make an aborted collage of stained sin no one has ever crept in to her canoe cracking the pod of yesteryears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/14/2014 5:09:00 AM
Awesome words you're using!
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Date: 1/1/2014 10:51:00 AM
I get the feeling this is a study and not someone you know personally - a painting or photograph perhaps. At any rate, your lines are mysteriously rewarding. daver
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Date: 12/17/2013 10:37:00 PM
Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Syam, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Syam Madappattu
Date: 12/19/2013 11:42:00 PM
Hai,SKAT...Thank you.A word about me.,easy going and positive..want to be a poet...eagerly waiting to get feed back from u and be acquainted with other poets..LOVE
Date: 12/10/2013 12:11:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Syam ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Syam Madappattu
Date: 12/11/2013 4:52:00 AM
Thanks. I was a bit reluctant to enter the world of poesy. Now I am relieved.Here are some who read and comment on my whims.WOW GREAT...Expect more comments
Date: 12/10/2013 11:39:00 AM
wow, I love the poem , deep art of her, Syam, ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Syam Madappattu
Date: 12/19/2013 11:46:00 PM
HAI,Linda,great pleasure to get a warm welcome from you.expect comments from u

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