The Poetry Zoo Trap

Everybody is a winner who plays any game, They are not sitting in the cool of the shade! They are out in the field of life. Facing near any and all manner of strife. They will have sincere fans that back them, And others who can't wait to stab them. That's called life... The true ones go on playing as a strong team, Not crawling to be number one, as if that were sonething supreme! Imagine running around with number one on your chest! As if that made you, a superior being, the Top poet, the one who is best! There are many poets here simply ignored. But it's perfectly fine, they are not here to be Número Uno on the poetry scoreboard. This is not the Poetry Olympics! But wait. It is for some. They must be the best.. That is their desired fate. Let's see if their poetry can even touch a Wordswoth or Whitman? But alas, they laugh,as though those poets were Odious hitmen. Just write good poetry, so true to you. Stay out of running in the poetry zoo! Love other poets before yourself. Then you will be number one on your own shelf. And that's how it should be, I do think, With a pride in your poetry, never popularity. Art is in not in big numbers made, But by thoughtful crafting like beautiful brocade. We know the swift words casually penned! And wise enough to see a poem as an art form, and we sigh..Amen!
5/20/2019 6:15 Pm PST
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Wolf Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:55 PM
I like the concept of 'Poetry Zoo.' … Like caged animals on the prowl... Who is watching whom anyway?! ~ Wolf on the Prowl, stalking the barn owl P.S. Contests-Shmontests!
Romios Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 5:32 PM
Gershon, stop making me laugh. Thank you for your wisdom Panagiota
Krutsinger Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 2:18 PM
This is what I strive for daily. " Just write good poetry, so true to you." Thank you for knowing this, and appreciating it.
Romios Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 2:25 PM
It's very much like painting a great piece. Sometimes they are, sometimes not so. But we both do our best. Yaaa for us. Panagiota
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 10:43 AM
This was a delightful entertaining muse for my morning start to engage the--poems art form Panagiota, Aloha wk
Romios Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 10:56 AM
As always, thank you. You are a remarkable and giving poet. California Panagiota
Awtry Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 10:08 PM
Oh, I like this line "But by thoughtful crafting like beautiful brocade." :)
Romios Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Good Evening from from Wine country in CA! I totally agree with you on that line. I love when I can do that with a poem. It's not always possible...((( I don't like my mediocre poems but they are there as a reminder to me.That indeed, I can do better. Thank you..Panagiota
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