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The Poetry Soup Diet

In February I started a wonderful diet It’s on poetry soup – I urge you to try it A pinch of humour and a bucketful of laughs Poems by the thousand – they don’t do things by halves Romantic verses and limericks too Poetry soup may be the diet for you Wonderful friends I have made on this site I could sit and write poems from morning till night I cannot guarantee this diet will help you lose weight I have to be honest I’m here quite by fate My husband’s illness started me on here It’s been my salvation I hold it so dear So dig out your pens and get on with writing Receiving soup comments is always exciting I am learning so much here every day On the poetry soup diet I will always stay Jan Allison 20th March 2014

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Date: 4/18/2015 6:01:00 PM
Jan, and I feel the same way. Great write my friend. ~HUGS~ Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2015 6:05:00 PM
I think many people write a similar type of poem Cynthia:-) Thanks for all your support I do appreciate you reading and enjoying some of my older poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/22/2014 1:43:00 AM
welcome to the Soup. Almost all of us who become addicts here have written our first Soup poem like this one!! And I bet you may write even more in the future. It's cute.
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Date: 3/22/2014 5:03:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comments Andrea. This is one diet I am determined to stick to! Happy reading and writing. Jan xxx
Date: 3/21/2014 7:33:00 PM
Once again you have excelled yourself Jan, I loved it, only wish I could write poetry, but with Peter on here and me reading them I have acquired so many friends like you, keep up the writing as I love reading...................Vera..........
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:45:00 PM
Oh Vera it is just so lovely to receive comments from lovely people like you and Peter - really makes the effort of writing rewarding when you get comments back. Do give writing a go - I only started writing in November and then it took months to have the confidence to post here. Do pop and see latest poem - The perils of getting older - I think it will make you chuckle. love to you both. Jan xxx
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Vera Duggan
Date: 3/21/2014 7:35:00 PM
Sorry made a boo boo I meant Love not lover.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 3/21/2014 7:34:00 PM
By the way lover to your family and hubby, look after him as they are so precious.xx
Date: 3/21/2014 8:31:00 AM
awesome write Jan!!! ,....so enjoyable lines... poetrysoup is a great diet! ..i don't get thin but I got fulled with love and friends!!!^__^
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/21/2014 9:26:00 AM
Oh Me too Aiyah! I have to have my fix of the Poetry Soup Diet at least 3 times a day! Happy reading and writing. Jan xxx
Date: 3/21/2014 1:10:00 AM
If you must diet...this is a great one!
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/21/2014 5:16:00 AM
I definitely agree! Thanks for dropping by. Jan xxxx
Date: 3/20/2014 8:09:00 PM
Jan, my darling sister! All my best to you and your hubby! You are welcome here with your spirited look at life in spite of your dear husband's cancer operation! It is an honour to know you! Hugs and a bunch of brotherly love... Jack XOXOX
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Date: 3/20/2014 8:19:00 PM
aww thank you so much for the lovely comments my dear brother Jack - I am having so much fun on here today - if you read my 'blog' and the banter I've had with Darren Watson and the resulting poems- makes me realise how special this place is. love and hugs as ever your cyber sister Jan

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