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The Poetic Struggle

Looking around 
Now I know
Why the views Don't 
Comment so 
They didn't get it
Now I see
It was only Clear to me

I must write better,
To describe
These burning thoughts
I have inside
And refuse 
To take heart
lack of comments
For My Art

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Faye Gibson

August 2, 2014 at 5:29 PM

Hey, Jerry... I like this. I love your style. It seems that everything I read is humorous or at least a little tongue in cheek.

Carrie Richards

July 30, 2014 at 9:05 PM

I must say, I like the suggestions below, because after being here for such a long time, I'm constantly amazed by the wonderful poems that often do not get comments. The like button would be such a great idea! You are a gifted poet....one of so many that should be read and appreciated! Ps.......I'm so honored to be among the winners in your recent contest, and can't thank you enough !! Thank you Jerry....I'm so grateful for the nod !! :)

Richard Palmer

July 28, 2014 at 3:24 PM

if you see space for improvement,improve Jerry,this site has some great writers,read,be entertained,but at the same time learn, perfect your skills,nice write bro

Robert Nehls

July 28, 2014 at 6:38 AM

Casarah has a very good suggestion. A like button sounds good, but, no dislike button. It is hard to comment on every poem, Jerry, but I will comment on this one. Liked.... Robert.

Tim Smith

July 27, 2014 at 5:33 PM

Wasn't going to comment on how bad this was but......no just kidding...lol.....I agree that many don't comment but just cherish the ones that do....cheers

Jerry T Curtis

July 28, 2014 at 6:16 AM

That was a good one, got me laughing first thing this morning. I have to agree with you, but I do appreciate knowing, that there is someone behind the view

Casarah Nance

July 27, 2014 at 4:49 PM

I like your thoughts and your art, it is dissappointing those that view without comments, there should be a like button, so if someone is shy they can still like your work!

Jerry T Curtis

July 28, 2014 at 6:19 AM

You have a good point, I wish we could add images also, I like to illustrate my stories. Thank Casarah for you comment

Tim Smith

July 27, 2014 at 5:34 PM