The Poet Inside

Her smile created me; and I write
To keep her with me I fight
For she is my lifes light


























- for you Wifeybear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:02 AM
So did Don Quixote and Dante of the Inferno fame ... like a true knight claimed one to move their sensibility through cosmic flight ... your oneness speak to them and I, our mortality from lamp gives the same light.
Devonshire Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 5:01 PM
The poem is sweet and your dedication to "Wifeybear" is very cute, Jeremiah. Your wife must have smiled when she saw this! Love, Carolyn
Orozco Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Lol its not like that its complicated heheh But I love her and she loves me so so so much!
Megens Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 4:31 PM
you shouldnt have to fight to keep one you love it should be there im sure she knoews how much you love her lil brother
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