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Her smile created me; and I write To keep her with me I fight For she is my lifes light - for you Wifeybear

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Date: 5/26/2009 7:02:00 AM
So did Don Quixote and Dante of the Inferno fame ... like a true knight claimed one to move their sensibility through cosmic flight ... your oneness speak to them and I, our mortality from lamp gives the same light.
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Date: 5/24/2009 5:01:00 PM
The poem is sweet and your dedication to "Wifeybear" is very cute, Jeremiah. Your wife must have smiled when she saw this! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2009 4:37:00 PM
Lol its not like that its complicated heheh But I love her and she loves me so so so much!
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Date: 5/24/2009 4:31:00 PM
you shouldnt have to fight to keep one you love it should be there im sure she knoews how much you love her lil brother
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