The Poem

Time sits in the flame of the brief candle The poem you want to write Please do before dawn comes _____________________________________________ 04/04/2017 Not For Contest

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Bawa Talwar

Date: 5/18/2017 6:32:00 PM

Excellent I liked the first line .it deserves to win.

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/19/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thank you ...

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

Date: 4/7/2017 3:28:00 AM

Thrilling work. I am impressed

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/7/2017 5:05:00 AM

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/5/2017 10:00:00 AM

An inviting image

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2017 10:53:00 AM

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/5/2017 8:19:00 AM

Ah what a fantastic conception dear, Brobir! A 7 my friend!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2017 10:54:00 AM

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/4/2017 2:42:00 PM

I like the 2nd line the best.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2017 7:30:00 AM

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/4/2017 2:20:00 PM

Lovely, Probir - I especially love the first line.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2017 7:30:00 AM

Thank you for enjoying ...

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/4/2017 2:10:00 PM

Very nice Probir. I like it :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2017 7:31:00 AM

Thank you. Heidi ...

Tim Smith

Date: 4/4/2017 12:50:00 PM

Very good Probir...a 7

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2017 7:31:00 AM

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Chris Green

Date: 4/4/2017 12:19:00 PM

Really nice Probir, I too love that first line.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2017 7:31:00 AM

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Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/4/2017 12:15:00 PM

Great kimo Probir, like Shubham I love the first line.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2017 7:32:00 AM

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Shubham Kamble

Date: 4/4/2017 12:07:00 PM

Amazing write! Particularly the first line... I like the concept. :) shubham

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/4/2017 12:09:00 PM

Thank you ...