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The Poem

Time sits in the flame of the brief candle 
The poem you want to write
Please do before dawn comes
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04/04/2017
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Copyright © Probir Gupta | Year Posted 2017

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May 18, 2017 at 6:32 PM

Excellent I liked the first line .it deserves to win.

May 19, 2017 at 10:01 AM

Thank you ...

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

April 7, 2017 at 3:28 AM

Thrilling work. I am impressed

April 7, 2017 at 5:05 AM

Thank you ...

April 5, 2017 at 10:00 AM

An inviting image

April 5, 2017 at 10:53 AM

Thank You ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 5, 2017 at 8:19 AM

Ah what a fantastic conception dear, Brobir! A 7 my friend!

April 5, 2017 at 10:54 AM

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Darlene De Beaulieu

April 4, 2017 at 2:42 PM

I like the 2nd line the best.

April 5, 2017 at 7:30 AM

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April 4, 2017 at 2:20 PM

Lovely, Probir - I especially love the first line.

April 5, 2017 at 7:30 AM

Thank you for enjoying ...

April 4, 2017 at 2:10 PM

Very nice Probir. I like it :)

April 5, 2017 at 7:31 AM

Thank you. Heidi ...

April 4, 2017 at 12:50 PM

Very good Probir...a 7

April 5, 2017 at 7:31 AM

Thank you ...

April 4, 2017 at 12:19 PM

Really nice Probir, I too love that first line.

April 5, 2017 at 7:31 AM

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Elizabeth Kinch

April 4, 2017 at 12:15 PM

Great kimo Probir, like Shubham I love the first line.

April 5, 2017 at 7:32 AM

Thank you ...

April 4, 2017 at 12:07 PM

Amazing write! Particularly the first line... I like the concept. :) shubham

April 4, 2017 at 12:09 PM

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