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Stars blaze the night While a pen of tears Smears words across, A white sheet of fears Letting out your soul To breathe a verse Something you seek No need to rehearse A powerful statement The thoughts from within A time taking pain Once you finally begin A constant word play Descriptive and woven The purest of feelings Are the ones you’ve chosen To write and recite Put down in words Because balls of paper Will never be heard.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/11/2012 5:45:00 PM
Hey Phill! Great to see you here! An excellent poem...I remember it. As far as reviews...you review people and they will review you. And of course...placing in contest gets you reviews. Checking reviews and seeing how many people have viewed your poem is so much easier here. And the contests are much fun!
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Philip Souza
Date: 6/12/2012 12:39:00 AM
Thank so much Caleb,your a solid Dude,I appreciate everything !
Date: 6/11/2012 11:09:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Phillip - you written well, like it - love from Norway and me Anne-Lise
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Philip Souza
Date: 6/11/2012 2:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-lisa,and much love from the U.S.!
Date: 6/10/2012 10:54:00 PM
wow impressive,you will learn along the way welcome to the SOUP Philip
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Philip Souza
Date: 6/11/2012 2:09:00 PM
Thank a lot Richard,I appreciate your review and thanks for welcoming me !
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Philip Souza
Date: 6/11/2012 6:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard ,I appreciate the comment,and thanks for welcoming me !
Date: 6/10/2012 9:51:00 PM
Hi my name is Phil this is my first poem on here don't know if I put it in the right spot,if any one can let me know,how I get it reviewed? thank you
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