Philip Souza Poet Verse

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Stars blaze the night 
While a pen of tears 
Smears words across, 
A white sheet of fears 
  
Letting out your soul 
To breathe a verse 
Something you seek 
No need to rehearse 
  
A powerful statement 
The thoughts from within 
A time taking pain 
Once you finally begin 
  
A constant word play 
Descriptive and woven 
The purest of feelings 
Are the ones you’ve chosen 
  
To write and recite 
Put down in words 
Because balls of paper 
Will never be heard.

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Painted Hunter June 11, 2012 at 5:45 PM Hey Phill! Great to see you here! An excellent poem...I remember it. As far as reviews...you review people and they will review you. And of course...placing in contest gets you reviews. Checking reviews and seeing how many people have viewed your poem is so much easier here. And the contests are much fun! Philip Souza June 12, 2012 at 12:39 AM Thank so much Caleb,your a solid Dude,I appreciate everything !

Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2012 at 11:09 AM Welcome to P-Soup Phillip - you written well, like it - love from Norway and me Anne-Lise Philip Souza June 11, 2012 at 2:11 PM Thank you so much Anne-lisa,and much love from the U.S.!

Richard Palmer June 10, 2012 at 10:54 PM wow impressive,you will learn along the way welcome to the SOUP Philip Philip Souza June 11, 2012 at 2:09 PM Thank a lot Richard,I appreciate your review and thanks for welcoming me ! Philip Souza June 11, 2012 at 6:31 AM Thanks so much Richard ,I appreciate the comment,and thanks for welcoming me !

Philip Souza June 10, 2012 at 9:51 PM Hi my name is Phil this is my first poem on here don't know if I put it in the right spot,if any one can let me know,how I get it reviewed? thank you