Aanchal Shrivastava Poet Verse

The Pleasure Melt

The drops were saying something,one day.
The tinkle answered to every with a yes.
The commotion of senses was manually stopped since
eyes were closed.
particles recruited only the relaxed sanity,verges blunt with ease in the flow.

The moulds are designed to be felt,acknowledged.
The rhymes of the patterns spoke of balance and unobjectionable,layers remained.
Tangled cliches got overthrew by the murmur still making their way.

The plates of soundless aroma,dropped from air
in air.

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Beata Agustin September 28, 2024 at 5:18 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Sharaj Panwar April 24, 2016 at 10:38 AM Congrats for you post entry Anchal. Good work :) I hope you will get to know new poetry lover friends and will sharpen your skills here. I would love to know more of you. Consider me your new poetry soup friend. Best Sharaj

Skat A April 19, 2016 at 11:03 PM Aanchal Shrivastava, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Aanchal Shrivastava April 20, 2016 at 10:04 AM ohhh hi SKAT! thanks for the smile train! =D I am a student perusing bachelors in engineering :)

Moon Flower April 19, 2016 at 7:32 AM That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Aanchal. :) Aanchal Shrivastava April 20, 2016 at 10:06 AM Thank u :)

Poet Destroyer A April 19, 2016 at 6:40 AM Of course Anachal, I'm on my toes this morning... Greeting and enjoying the new poets.... Thank for the prompt reply. Linda Aanchal Shrivastava April 20, 2016 at 10:07 AM :D!! <3

Poet Destroyer A April 19, 2016 at 6:28 AM Aanchal, great read... The imagery is awesome. Nice to read your first post.... I'll be back in a few hours to see if you have a new poem. Welcome aboard. Love Linda Aanchal Shrivastava April 19, 2016 at 6:38 AM Thank you! for such a sooner seek and appreciation :)