The Placebo Affect Pt 2

Making you re-peat everything over and over again
Just a broken record
Feel like the real deal mental patient
Because you have no patcients
Do you want my autogragh?
Would others just feel intimidated
If they were to posses such power in insightful thinking?
Or would they not give two cents?
Are you just going to be living proof that were just all guine pigs?
Till the day you die
This is just all a practice test
A biomechanical experiment
Please take a complimentary mint
Just enough to distract you
So you don't ask any questions
Because there's no anwsers
Just all air
Nothing will always be something
Embedded into every cell
That have been manipulated
Get the latest vaccine
Than lets all go to McDonalds
Children are dying every day
Are they still innocent?
Or just lost souls?
Because they never learn't their lesson(s) in their last life
Just wait till the men in black kidnap you
You'll be the first human to see 
what really goes on behind closed doors
Ghosts, UFO's, microchips, human experimentation, conspiracy theories, war and religion
We as humans are predestioned 
Programed to complete certain tasks
To get to the level were the governments satisfied with your workings
You drive a car to work
Than go to work to pay for your car
We all recieve metal and paper
Brainwashed into thinking thats the only pro-ogrative
Moneys evil
Just causes caious 
If you pocess a dollar bill and cut it in half
Its just wortheless
Than you get to a certain age
And your suppost to retire
Your expected to reases your life
To have accompliced everything on your bucket list
But in reality its all just a fat white lie
Hidden in a secret disguise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/27/2014 5:43:00 PM
Read part 1 and part two, some interesting staements in both, a lot of anger in these two poems held together with the thread of despair yet woven into a coat whose pockets contain coins of truth
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