The Pipe

Be whatever can portray from me maybe false or reality. A youth for only that was i heroicly percieved,saving a guy. The newspapers,both local and national a calm approach,not behaving rational. This man must have been through an ill guide pipe from exhaust and into his ride. I opened his door,out bellowed smoke poor chap eased out,seeming to choke i can`t understand,he wasn`t to blame anyone with decency,would do the same.
Paul beadnall for: Sponsor Shani Fassbender Contest Name Tell Me a Secret

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/2/2011 5:00:00 PM
well-scribed , paul.. a winner for me! ) huggs, nette
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/2/2011 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Nette,unfortunately i misunderstood the rules,and had to be in monorhyme and was n/a`d.But was still fun writing.. Blessings from Paul.
Date: 9/2/2011 8:08:00 AM
love the story!! is this true?? good luck in the contest my friend. cory
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/2/2011 10:12:00 AM
A total made up story,inspired by an event in a film. The national papers etc.. i got carried away with trying to decieve the contest runner. I think started believing myself. Thanks though blessings from ya friend Paul.
Date: 9/2/2011 3:41:00 AM
Paul, I really like this story. So I am thinking this one really did happen. Am I right?Or did you steal this from a headline?
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/2/2011 7:35:00 AM
A fragment of my imagination,Andrea.You may think what kind of mind do i have.. Ahaha. Thanks very much .. Blessings from Paul.
Date: 9/1/2011 7:37:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this interesting work..Sara
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Date: 9/1/2011 9:26:00 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I am happy I was able to read your wonderful poetry today Paul. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2011 12:02:00 AM
ooo! Paul, such honesty. A very good secret to share. Thank you for sharing,..Linda
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/1/2011 8:57:00 AM
Hi Linda,i misunderstood the contest rules,not realising had to be in monorhyme.Also said tell a secret be it true or made up and let the judge see if she pinpoint. To let you know it was a total imaginative poem.Helped on by a similar occurance ..Blessings from Paul
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