Paul Beadnall Poet Rhyme

The Pipe

Be whatever can portray from me
maybe false or reality.
A youth for only that was i
heroicly percieved,saving a guy.



The newspapers,both local and national
a calm approach,not behaving rational.
This man must  have been through an ill guide
pipe from exhaust and into his ride.



I opened his door,out bellowed smoke
poor chap eased out,seeming to choke
i can`t understand,he wasn`t to blame
anyone with decency,would do the same.

Paul beadnall for:
Sponsor Shani Fassbender 
Contest Name Tell Me a Secret

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Nette Onclaud September 2, 2011 at 5:00 PM well-scribed , paul.. a winner for me! ) huggs, nette Paul Beadnall September 2, 2011 at 6:15 PM Thanks Nette,unfortunately i misunderstood the rules,and had to be in monorhyme and was n/a`d.But was still fun writing.. Blessings from Paul.

Cory Long September 2, 2011 at 8:08 AM love the story!! is this true?? good luck in the contest my friend. cory Paul Beadnall September 2, 2011 at 10:12 AM A total made up story,inspired by an event in a film. The national papers etc.. i got carried away with trying to decieve the contest runner. I think started believing myself. Thanks though blessings from ya friend Paul.

Andrea Dietrich September 2, 2011 at 3:41 AM Paul, I really like this story. So I am thinking this one really did happen. Am I right?Or did you steal this from a headline? Paul Beadnall September 2, 2011 at 7:35 AM A fragment of my imagination,Andrea.You may think what kind of mind do i have.. Ahaha. Thanks very much .. Blessings from Paul.

Sara Kendrick September 1, 2011 at 7:37 PM Good luck in the contest with this interesting work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown September 1, 2011 at 9:26 AM So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I am happy I was able to read your wonderful poetry today Paul. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2011 at 12:02 AM ooo! Paul, such honesty. A very good secret to share. Thank you for sharing,..Linda Paul Beadnall September 1, 2011 at 8:57 AM Hi Linda,i misunderstood the contest rules,not realising had to be in monorhyme.Also said tell a secret be it true or made up and let the judge see if she pinpoint. To let you know it was a total imaginative poem.Helped on by a similar occurance ..Blessings from Paul