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The Piano

Pianist's fingers trill the room
 while the ghosts of Liszt and Chopin loom






For entry to competition on The Piano for Rick Parise competition

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John Freeman

January 24, 2011 at 10:25 AM

Congratulations on your successful placement, Deirdre. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 14, 2011 at 10:01 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Deirdre in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

January 12, 2011 at 7:35 AM

Congratulations on your success. Eamon

Sara Kendrick

January 11, 2011 at 2:35 PM

Congratulations ...Sara

Kash Poet

January 11, 2011 at 9:47 AM

Well Deirdre this one is something different!Congrats on your well deserved win!-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 11, 2011 at 9:17 AM

Congratulations on ths well deserved win in the contest, Deirdre

Carrie Richards

January 11, 2011 at 8:05 AM

I would have also put this much higher in the contest....just beautifully written!

Nick Bagnall

January 11, 2011 at 4:15 AM

This is lovely, nice to see the composer references in there, this is another piece I would have liked to see placed higher

Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2011 at 10:03 PM

Awesome win, Deirdre. Congratulations to you. LUv, andrea

Charles Henderson

January 10, 2011 at 8:54 PM

Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Charles

Francine Roberts

January 10, 2011 at 5:30 PM

I love this one, congrats on your win in the contest Deirdre

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 10, 2011 at 5:04 PM

Congrats Deirdre on your wonderful win in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry .. enjoy your top ten victory and success tonight for a lovely write with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

January 10, 2011 at 5:03 PM

Like the way you referenced Liszt and Chopin, Deirdre. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Liz Walsh

January 8, 2011 at 10:41 AM

Lovely Deirdre - I love the notion of the ghosts of Liszt and Chopin looming! Liz

Eamon Duffin

January 7, 2011 at 5:52 AM

Hi D. I was surprised at my placement with the haiku. (But I had a good teacher). the contests are great. It's like an exercise that makes one think. Love this Crystalline, ( another new word). You summed up a great vision in this musical piece. best of luck in the contest. See you Tuesday. Eamon