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The Piano

Pianist's fingers trill the room
 while the ghosts of Liszt and Chopin loom






For entry to competition on The Piano for Rick Parise competition

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John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your successful placement, Deirdre. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 10:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Deirdre in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/12/2011 7:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your success. Eamon

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2011 2:35:00 PM

Congratulations ...Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 1/11/2011 9:47:00 AM

Well Deirdre this one is something different!Congrats on your well deserved win!-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/11/2011 9:17:00 AM

Congratulations on ths well deserved win in the contest, Deirdre

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/11/2011 8:05:00 AM

I would have also put this much higher in the contest....just beautifully written!

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/11/2011 4:15:00 AM

This is lovely, nice to see the composer references in there, this is another piece I would have liked to see placed higher

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 10:03:00 PM

Awesome win, Deirdre. Congratulations to you. LUv, andrea

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/10/2011 8:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Charles

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/10/2011 5:30:00 PM

I love this one, congrats on your win in the contest Deirdre

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 5:04:00 PM

Congrats Deirdre on your wonderful win in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry .. enjoy your top ten victory and success tonight for a lovely write with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 5:03:00 PM

Like the way you referenced Liszt and Chopin, Deirdre. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Liz Walsh

Date: 1/8/2011 10:41:00 AM

Lovely Deirdre - I love the notion of the ghosts of Liszt and Chopin looming! Liz

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/7/2011 5:52:00 AM

Hi D. I was surprised at my placement with the haiku. (But I had a good teacher). the contests are great. It's like an exercise that makes one think. Love this Crystalline, ( another new word). You summed up a great vision in this musical piece. best of luck in the contest. See you Tuesday. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2011 10:45:00 PM

Love that ghost line. Great idea for the contest!

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/6/2011 7:06:00 PM

love it, good luck in the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2011 5:07:00 PM

Really like this one..Glad that I chose it to read this eve..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/6/2011 4:30:00 PM

Ahh....I love this one !!! :)