Jenish Somadas Poet Verse

The Piano

tuneless piano
silently singing
the truth of silence.

broken keys fallen
in the rounding path 
of stiff ticking clock.

sun of love once perched
fingering the hearts
joined the joke of life.

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Funom Makama June 25, 2020 at 1:42 PM Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem. Jenish Somadas June 26, 2020 at 1:03 AM Thank you Funom for your delightful words..

Gershon Wolf June 21, 2020 at 2:08 PM The sun of love once perched... and in the keys' degradation, the sad 'joke of life' is seen... Yet perhaps there is beauty in those broken-down keys too. Food for thought... Thanks, Jenish Jenish Somadas June 21, 2020 at 11:36 PM Thank you Gershon for your kind support..

Shirley Hawkins June 21, 2020 at 8:38 AM I love this nostalgic beautiful poem... Thank you, Jenish... Jenish Somadas June 21, 2020 at 11:35 PM Thank you Shirley for your kind support..

Vijay Pandit June 21, 2020 at 7:52 AM I hear the silence of the piano--great write, Jenish. Jenish Somadas June 21, 2020 at 11:35 PM Thank you Vijay for your kind support..

Regina Mcintosh June 21, 2020 at 7:31 AM Wonderful writing. I love it. God bless you with love, Gina Jenish Somadas June 21, 2020 at 11:35 PM Thank you Regina for your delightful words..

Demetrios Trifiatis June 21, 2020 at 7:01 AM Captivating poem dearest, Jenish. Somehow sad but so beautiful writing dearest Jenish. Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas June 21, 2020 at 11:34 PM Thank you Demetrios for your support..

Mahtab Bangalee June 21, 2020 at 2:32 AM music- there is heart of peaceful living ..... Jenish Somadas June 21, 2020 at 3:22 AM Thank you Mahtab..

Besma Riabi Dziri June 21, 2020 at 2:09 AM The weight of a lifetime.. a mighty silence preceded by symphonies of Life and Love! What a great interpretation of your deep thoughts! Unique and stunning! A great pleasure to read, Jenish! My deepest regards and blessings. Jenish Somadas June 21, 2020 at 3:22 AM Thank you Besma for that delightful comment..

Eve Roper June 21, 2020 at 1:14 AM Beautiful verse, Jenish, be safe. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas June 21, 2020 at 1:41 AM Thank you Eve.. Have a great day!!