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The Phenomenon

we are but silt caught
held in a flow labeled time
current to future


stan sand

allegoryanalogyhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2018 7:30:00 PM

this is really nice!! Like Caycay says, thought provoking too.

Sand Blown
Date: 12/28/2018 8:09:00 PM

thank you andrea...mathematics shines as a neutral ground

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/28/2018 1:49:00 PM

Very deep and thought provoking! All the best ... CayCay

Sand Blown
Date: 12/28/2018 7:14:00 PM

thanks...this 'write site' inclines me toward what is now just possible scifi

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/28/2018 12:40:00 PM

Interesting write, Sand! Love how you weaved together silt, flow and current. This speaks volumes! Fave!

Sand Blown
Date: 12/28/2018 7:07:00 PM

haiku confines wording something fierce...time current flows nowhere...with respect to 3d, time is as a klein bottle

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 12/28/2018 12:18:00 PM

Very nice comparison of Time as a current flowing towards the future. I have a large classical music disk collection. It's the only music I listen to with the exception of bluegrass and very early New Orlean jazz. Thank you for the stop by. Best to you. / M

Sand Blown
Date: 12/28/2018 7:04:00 PM

thanks for the comment...i've a good classical record and disk collection plus smooth easy listening piano jazz ...oldies are also a favorite...two favorite vocalists are nana mouskouri and leonard cohen...cheers

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