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The Phantom Couple

Fog is thick on this summer's night My only companion the lighthouse light Your empty absence I can no longer take Alone in this world I will surely break The beckoning ocean promises you again Only step closer and freely give in Confusion replaces the pain of my tears A shadowed phantom from the mist appears With a blink and a shake it is suddenly gone Hope guides me to the place it stood upon No remnants remain but two pairs in the sand Disappearing into the mist hand-in-hand I cover my face and fall to my knees Never alone, forever they watch over me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/8/2012 3:05:00 PM
Thank you all very much. It took me a while too finish it, but I'm so happy with how it turned out.
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Date: 9/8/2012 9:47:00 AM
nicely done Erin,loved the flow
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Date: 9/8/2012 7:00:00 AM
Beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks.
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Date: 9/7/2012 7:36:00 PM
Great poem! '^Never alone...' wonderful... Terry
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