The Phantom Couple

Fog is thick on this summer's night
My only companion the lighthouse light

Your empty absence I can no longer take
Alone in this world I will surely break

The beckoning ocean promises you again
Only step closer and freely give in

Confusion replaces the pain of my tears
A shadowed phantom from the mist appears

With a blink and a shake it is suddenly gone
Hope guides me to the place it stood upon

No remnants remain but two pairs in the sand
Disappearing into the mist hand-in-hand  

I cover my face and fall to my knees
Never alone, forever they watch over me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 8, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Thank you all very much. It took me a while too finish it, but I'm so happy with how it turned out.
Palmer Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 9:47 AM
nicely done Erin,loved the flow
Greenwood Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 7:00 AM
Beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks.
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September 7, 2012 at 7:36 PM
Great poem! '^Never alone...' wonderful... Terry
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