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The perspective of a Halloween candle....

Bright, orange, white, flicker..... Two black eyes, one dark mouth viewed, I'm the flame inside They trim the flesh out Stubby children's hands; entrails I'm the flame inside My face-like windows My removable roof-top I'm the flame inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/21/2015 4:19:00 PM
Jim I like this. :) **SKAT**
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Date: 9/7/2010 7:28:00 PM
I invite you to enter my contest "The Universe" see contest page.Rick
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Date: 9/7/2010 1:08:00 PM
Unique and orginal ! I loved this one!! :)
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Date: 9/6/2010 7:55:00 PM
love it, good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/6/2010 7:54:00 PM
Thats quite cool~enjoyed~Rick
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