The Perfect Woman

Her face etched firmly to her new found heart
Her heart now healed  just waiting its restart
a True love hope brings her to standing tall,
no face just virtue calls her love to fall 

She sees the fake from fact her pride now past 
Her past not perfect but she’s free at last 
She takes a breath and sees the big blue sky
She needs no answers to the question, “why”

The truth has set her free she knows herself
Her strength her pain she left on her top shelf
No more a tear imprisoned by her past
a Simple smile her dice she has now cast

I bring my puzzle looking for a match,
at last she’ll  be my true love’s perfect catch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/26/2016 8:09:00 PM
James, congratulations on your win I had to check again I placed you in the wrong place a 1st for you. Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve
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Just James
Date: 12/1/2016 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 11/22/2016 1:30:00 PM
aww this is so uplifting James what a beautiful sonnet and I really love the final couplet:-) hugs jan xx7
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Just James
Date: 11/24/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan for your kind words and super 7!!
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Just James
Date: 11/24/2016 10:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan for your kind words and super 7!!
Date: 11/20/2016 12:00:00 PM
Now you are making me wish this was me. It certainly is the me I would like to be. Isn't it time to delete MLPF ? It is upsetting your perfect line of over 100 visits.
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Just James
Date: 11/21/2016 11:37:00 PM
As you wish...:) Thanks for the visit bestie!
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Jean Murray
Date: 11/20/2016 12:02:00 PM
Or MILF...whatever the F that means.
Date: 11/18/2016 1:27:00 PM
endearing poem for sure, JJ... lucky you!..huggs
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Date: 11/21/2016 11:39:00 PM
Thank you Nette!
Date: 11/14/2016 4:54:00 AM
Very nice poem ... joyously rhythmic ... enjoyed so much ...
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Just James
Date: 11/14/2016 6:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Probir!
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