The Perfect Way Home

It's winter's evening, I am driving home.  The bare trees whisper my vulnerability like a secret to the sky.  I've come again to an all too familiar crossroads; the one of dreams and fear.  I stop at the traffic light waiting but I am lost within a cold ocean of myself.  Overhead on the telephone wires, a flock of blackbirds have gathered.  The electric current keeps their toes snug and warm as they chatter; eavesdropping on my thoughts.  I wonder why the birds have chosen this particular place with all its confusion?  Perhaps they are my muse, my witnesses and they wait for a change in the signal too.  With a slight ripple in the wind and the light, their wings lift up in unison and I am lifted too.  I have no need to tarry; I turn towards the fading sun.  My heart is carried by a light haven.  Inhaling a deep breath of me, I pass a billboard that tells me to have courage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Baker Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 5:47 AM
Really atmospheric and true of many a car journey I’ve had, and the whimsical thoughts that enter your head at such times.
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May 13, 2016 at 10:56 PM
KAREN, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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May 12, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Karen, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
Carroll Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 12:50 AM
Hi Karen,. Nice phenomenological write.. ken
Phillips Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 4:59 AM
Excellent ! I like the message conveyed in this poem. Like the symbolic expression and imagery used in this poem fantastic use of imagery here. Check out my poetry page.
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June 1, 2013 at 9:04 PM
Karen, I'm seeing this one on the featured list again.. wow... congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda
Najera Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 7:29 PM
This is fantastic! I had no trouble reading it and understand everything. Sometimes in poems they're hard to understand, but this poem here was just beautiful! I favored this! Great job!
Austin Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 9:48 AM
Birds symbolizing life. I guess that's what you'd call the inspiration. And blackbirds? They scold real fine. Congrats on the selection. daver
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March 3, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Karen, many blessings on your featured poem this passed week. Have yourself a new and awesome week.:-) Always & Forever * LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 2:50 PM
Everyday..sometimes they are just too similiar? Sometimesits comforting and sometimes its not aye? Your form is Narrative. Light & Love
A   Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 8:39 AM
Good morning ;-) karen wisdom from a billboard who would have thought it , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Woooow,this is a wery good written poem Karen, enjoy to read it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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