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The Perfect Storm

She tried to drown out the noise of all their mocking laughter. Booming thunder shook the world and lightening came quickly after. She watched the storm above her head with sadness in her eyes. The pain had come again like rain falling from the skies. Dark gray clouds formed overhead with no sunlight to come through. The glowing rays were scattered away and never got to you. But no one came to rescue her, there was nothing left but rain. Even though the storm subsided; she drowned in all her pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/11/2014 7:56:00 PM
This is beautifully written, it speaks to my heart, I just wanted you to know that.
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Date: 11/11/2014 1:06:00 PM
Beautifully done, incredible story behind.... Hugs Ellie..... :)
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Date: 11/11/2014 3:47:00 AM
This poem is relatable! It's definitely one of my favouties! And welcome to poetrysoup ^_^
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Date: 11/8/2014 12:59:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Alex - I choose your first very well written poem - Painful written ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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