The Perfect Place

The perfect place is full of laughter
hopes and dreams while poeple get happier
At the top of as hill  is an apple tree 
on one of the branches is a wooden swin
From top to bottom
a mudslide you'll see
into a pond with frogs and with geese
It's crystal clear blue with a border of green
with lilly pads and ducks happily swimming
Green fields of flowers cover the land
Marigolds, Roses, Lillies and aren't they grand
the land is bordered by forests with animals and trees
monkey's, gorrilla's, kangaroo's, and chimpanzee's
Up in the biggest tree of them all there is a home
Of a family not big nor small
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Agustin Avatar
February 4, 2026 at 9:10 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 10, 2016 at 2:32 AM
Sarah, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 5, 2015 at 1:56 AM
Sarah:) Wonderful poem, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT
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