The Perfect Note

You are beautiful inside out,
And because of that our love you 
never should doubt,
You bring out the best in me,
Your the missing note to my perfect 
symphony,
Words can't express how much I 
love you,
Next to God I promise to put no one 
above you,
I can wait to to say I do,
Not only to be your wife, 
But the wife that God want me to 
be, 
Your help meet, a mother, and the 
best wife I can be, 
Our love will continue to soar, 
You make me smile and this feeling 
I can't ignore,
Your perfect note has finished my 
love symphony.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 16, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Tiffany,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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October 6, 2012 at 1:16 PM
NICE!!! Lovely dedication! It's nice how you've got the order of importance right - it puts things into perspective. Just lovely!
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 9:11 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Tiffany. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
Warren Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 3:33 PM
deep, emotional, but soo expressive.. bluntly.. i very much enjoyed this an look forward to reading more perfect notes
Chawla Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 8:07 AM
FULL OF FEELINGS!
Chawla Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 8:07 AM
FULL OF FEELINGS!
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September 27, 2012 at 8:07 AM
Enjoyed stopping by and reading this lovely "perfect note" of yours..regards INK-U-SCRIPT...check your soup mail!
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 10:19 PM
Thank for showing love... I am posting more so please feel free to check them out. I appreciate the positive feedback.
Grisetti Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 10:15 PM
A lovely, touching poem. A wonderful tribute to your love.
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