The Perfect Haiku

We are not perfect.
Your flaws draws me close to you.
Flawless attracts doubt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 7:58 PM
YES, now THAT's what I'm talking about. For perfect haiku!
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 2:34 PM
RIGHT....we are not. - Well said Elliott! - oxox Anne-Lise
Onclaud Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 1:37 PM
yes, yes to this, elliott.. and to love an imperfectly perfect person... what joy your 'ku brings... superb!..:) huggs!
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