The Perfect Funeral

The tune of "Amazing Grace" echoes from afar 
O'er the hill...the bagpiper appears 
Family and friends circled 'round 
Saddened eyes- for last good-byes 
Cell phones vibrate- "It's a girl" 
Tears of sorrow and joy entwine   


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6/5/2021
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Theraven Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 3:27 AM
Many that might of missed out on the grandeur in this one Charles. Glad I'm not one of them. -Richard
Wolf Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 4:04 PM
One door closes; a second opens... As the world turns. Hope all is well, Charlie. Take good care, Gershon
Laurie Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 10:31 PM
Hello charles … your verse is great charles. A true story on the variables in life - thank you charles - Lindsay
Seeker Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Poignant pause in grief interlacing joy. Congrats Charles
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:05 AM
Dualities of life well captured. Congratulations
Alex Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations!
Gelok Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 11:40 AM
How wonderful this is...the circle of life! Good luck,
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Hello Charles Messina, we are born and then we die. that is life. enjoy your day my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Life goes on Charlie, heartache then joy. Hope you're well Tom
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