The Perfect Day

The perfect day Cheery-dawn awakens foretold by a chirping bird As rising sun captivates without a spoken word Illuminating morning dew on our garden of roses Spreading the scent of joy a new day proposes. Vibrant vistas oscillate with golden morning breeze, Darker clouds depart as emerging hues appease, Sunshine reigns pleasantly over young blue skies, Remnants of gloom vanish before our grateful eyes. Welcoming family and friends we gather together Setting a picnic table to immerse in beautiful weather Blissful in the company of loving conversation Delighted by the bounty of omnipresent elation. Birds alert each other sensing arrival of a meal As burgers and hot dogs sizzle on the summer grill, Happily we devour the food feeling quite gratified As small talk reverberates being heartily satisfied. Not a hint of despair resides on the changing horizon, Shiny blaze adorns trees as distant hills brighten, Calming winds begin to flow when sun wishes to set As we celebrate an orange glow of ephemeral sunset. Evening dresses in misty colors to say good bye, Moon hides behind twilight appearing a bit shy And we close the chapter on a beautiful blessed day Praying diligently the glorious feeling is here to stay. Rain clouds beyond mountains arrive with afterglow As the perfect day ends with a spectacular rainbow. November 24, 2017 Placed 2nd..contest by Madison Demetros Placed 3rd: Strand Pick 9 Contest by Brian Strand
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Tripp Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations! Very beautiful write.
Pandit Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Thank you Rhoda.
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December 6, 2017 at 9:34 PM
Beautiful imagery. Awesome poem, Vijay.
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December 11, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Thank you Line.
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December 5, 2017 at 9:23 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATULATIONS, Vijay! Janice
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December 6, 2017 at 6:31 AM
Thank you Janice!
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 8:34 PM
Vijay, great write congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 6:30 AM
Thank you Eve!
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December 5, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Vijay, I enjoyed this write, it brought many fond memories of our backyard cookouts. Congrats on your win. John
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December 5, 2017 at 12:10 PM
Thank you John!
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December 1, 2017 at 12:21 PM
That's a masterpiece!
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December 1, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Thank you Frances.
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November 28, 2017 at 8:32 AM
What an enjoyable poem Vijay good luck in the contest.
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November 28, 2017 at 8:37 AM
Thank you Edward!
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November 27, 2017 at 11:43 AM
A joyful, fun and beautiful poem to read. This is the perfect day you have written about so well Vijay ! :)
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November 28, 2017 at 6:25 AM
Thank you Heidi!
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November 27, 2017 at 10:28 AM
WoW! Your poem took me to that perfect day, Vijay. Beautiful poem w/stunning imagery. You pen rainbow shines. Great crescendo ending. Listening to the song "Perfect Day" by Everette Harp while reading your gorgeous poem was a spiritual feeling. Ty, bro. Aurora bright write. Love and hugs always.
Pandit Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 11:01 AM
Many thanks Freddie!
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November 26, 2017 at 6:42 AM
You have indeed described a beautiful day, my friend! Just lovely! GL in contest!
Pandit Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 12:39 PM
Thank you Kim!
One Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 5:46 AM
Great imagery Vijay.. Really does sound like a perfect day to me.. Good luck in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 6:25 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 7:24 PM
wow, Vijay you really painted the perfect day for us. So many glorious scenes in that one day. I love that phrase "immerse in beautiful weather"
Pandit Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 6:25 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Swartz Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 6:20 PM
This is a beautiful write Vijay! That imagery is mixed perfectly with the flow. You should have a winner here!
Pandit Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 6:24 AM
Thank you James!
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November 25, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Nothing to not love; content, rhyme and flow all embraced me in wonderful poetry. A joy to read and spend time with this poem, Vijay. Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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November 26, 2017 at 6:24 AM
Thank you CayCay!
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November 25, 2017 at 2:24 PM
I floated through your words as calm and joy intermingled in my thoughts. You are a true artist.
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November 26, 2017 at 6:23 AM
Thank you Patricia!
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November 25, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Vijay--superb use of personification and imagery! Love it. Janice
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November 25, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Thank you Janice!
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November 24, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Truly a perfect day....
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November 25, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Thank you Pashang!
Michael Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 8:41 AM
Lovely without a doubt, Vijay... So positive in every way...A Beautiful weekend for you....
Pandit Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 11:59 AM
Many thanks Arturo!
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November 24, 2017 at 7:52 AM
A fascinating poem celebrating life's beauty in all its glory! Marvelously done dearest, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Thank you Demetrios--appreciate your comments!
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November 24, 2017 at 7:42 AM
This is very nicely done indeed, Vijay. GL in the contest!
Pandit Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Thank you Dale--appreciate your visit and comments!
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November 24, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Hello Vijay!! I really like your rhyme poem here: "The Perfect Day"!! Best of Luck in the contest with your entry. I think you might have the winning entry for sure with this one. The rhymes, the words, the imagery are all beautifully and quite seamlessly articulated. A Superb Poem for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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November 24, 2017 at 11:56 AM
Many thanks Gary--appreciate your comments!
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