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The Perfect Day

The perfect day Cheery-dawn awakens foretold by a chirping bird As rising sun captivates without a spoken word Illuminating morning dew on our garden of roses Spreading the scent of joy a new day proposes. Vibrant vistas oscillate with golden morning breeze, Darker clouds depart as emerging hues appease, Sunshine reigns pleasantly over young blue skies, Remnants of gloom vanish before our grateful eyes. Welcoming family and friends we gather together Setting a picnic table to immerse in beautiful weather Blissful in the company of loving conversation Delighted by the bounty of omnipresent elation. Birds alert each other sensing arrival of a meal As burgers and hot dogs sizzle on the summer grill, Happily we devour the food feeling quite gratified As small talk reverberates being heartily satisfied. Not a hint of despair resides on the changing horizon, Shiny blaze adorns trees as distant hills brighten, Calming winds begin to flow when sun wishes to set As we celebrate an orange glow of ephemeral sunset. Evening dresses in misty colors to say good bye, Moon hides behind twilight appearing a bit shy And we close the chapter on a beautiful blessed day Praying diligently the glorious feeling is here to stay. Rain clouds beyond mountains arrive with afterglow As the perfect day ends with a spectacular rainbow. November 24, 2017 Placed 2nd..contest by Madison Demetros Placed 3rd: Strand Pick 9 Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 12/7/2017 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations! Very beautiful write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda.
Date: 12/6/2017 9:34:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Awesome poem, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 12/5/2017 9:23:00 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATULATIONS, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 12/5/2017 8:34:00 PM
Vijay, great write congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 6:30:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 12/5/2017 11:46:00 AM
Vijay, I enjoyed this write, it brought many fond memories of our backyard cookouts. Congrats on your win. John
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/5/2017 12:10:00 PM
Thank you John!
Date: 12/1/2017 12:21:00 PM
That's a masterpiece!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/1/2017 2:20:00 PM
Thank you Frances.
Date: 11/28/2017 8:32:00 AM
What an enjoyable poem Vijay good luck in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/28/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Edward!
Date: 11/27/2017 11:43:00 AM
A joyful, fun and beautiful poem to read. This is the perfect day you have written about so well Vijay ! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/28/2017 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 11/27/2017 10:28:00 AM
WoW! Your poem took me to that perfect day, Vijay. Beautiful poem w/stunning imagery. You pen rainbow shines. Great crescendo ending. Listening to the song "Perfect Day" by Everette Harp while reading your gorgeous poem was a spiritual feeling. Ty, bro. Aurora bright write. Love and hugs always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/27/2017 11:01:00 AM
Many thanks Freddie!
Date: 11/26/2017 6:42:00 AM
You have indeed described a beautiful day, my friend! Just lovely! GL in contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2017 12:39:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 11/26/2017 5:46:00 AM
Great imagery Vijay.. Really does sound like a perfect day to me.. Good luck in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2017 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 11/25/2017 7:24:00 PM
wow, Vijay you really painted the perfect day for us. So many glorious scenes in that one day. I love that phrase "immerse in beautiful weather"
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2017 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 11/25/2017 6:20:00 PM
This is a beautiful write Vijay! That imagery is mixed perfectly with the flow. You should have a winner here!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2017 6:24:00 AM
Thank you James!
Date: 11/25/2017 2:52:00 PM
Nothing to not love; content, rhyme and flow all embraced me in wonderful poetry. A joy to read and spend time with this poem, Vijay. Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2017 6:24:00 AM
Thank you CayCay!
Date: 11/25/2017 2:24:00 PM
I floated through your words as calm and joy intermingled in my thoughts. You are a true artist.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2017 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Patricia!
Date: 11/25/2017 9:12:00 AM
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Vijay--superb use of personification and imagery! Love it. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2017 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 11/24/2017 6:38:00 PM
Truly a perfect day....
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thank you Pashang!
Date: 11/24/2017 8:41:00 AM
Lovely without a doubt, Vijay... So positive in every way...A Beautiful weekend for you....
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/24/2017 11:59:00 AM
Many thanks Arturo!
Date: 11/24/2017 7:52:00 AM
A fascinating poem celebrating life's beauty in all its glory! Marvelously done dearest, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/24/2017 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios--appreciate your comments!
Date: 11/24/2017 7:42:00 AM
This is very nicely done indeed, Vijay. GL in the contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/24/2017 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Dale--appreciate your visit and comments!
Date: 11/24/2017 6:49:00 AM
Hello Vijay!! I really like your rhyme poem here: "The Perfect Day"!! Best of Luck in the contest with your entry. I think you might have the winning entry for sure with this one. The rhymes, the words, the imagery are all beautifully and quite seamlessly articulated. A Superb Poem for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/24/2017 11:56:00 AM
Many thanks Gary--appreciate your comments!

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