The Perfect Christmas Gift

The most perfect gift I ever received
Was very real and not perceived
It was given me so long ago
I feel honored it was bestowed

It did not come with a bow or wrap
It had no buttons, ties or snaps.
It had no box no tape nor tag
It did not come in a Santa bag.

It was not placed beneath our tree
Though it was received with glee
It was not hung in my Christmas stocking
It does keep coming without stopping

The gift you see was of family
The twelve of us including me
My parents teaching us of togetherness
That would bring lifelong happiness

That our true gifts were in each other
With all my sisters and my brothers.
For whatever material things we gather
They in the long run do not matter.

Your family is your perfect gift
The passage of time is much too swift
So look not underneath your tree
But in your heart and you will see!

David Brown
12/6/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/5/2015 11:06:00 PM
David, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2014 6:48:00 PM
This is a wonderful winning poem David, it's not about the gift, but what's in our hearts, love this... Wishing you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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David Brown
Date: 12/24/2014 11:02:00 PM
Thank You Linda, wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas as well!
Date: 12/30/2013 2:36:00 PM
Excellent moral lesson. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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David Brown
Date: 5/22/2014 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Deb!
Date: 12/28/2013 3:50:00 PM
Clever and heart felt piece. Congratulations on your 1st place finish.
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David Brown
Date: 12/28/2013 5:34:00 PM
Thank You Richard!
Date: 12/28/2013 7:06:00 AM
Glad to see your on the winners' list and congratulations, David
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David Brown
Date: 12/28/2013 5:34:00 PM
Thank You Dr.
Date: 12/7/2013 5:19:00 AM
I agree with you your family is a perfect gift, David
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David Brown
Date: 12/7/2013 9:33:00 AM
Thank You Dr.
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