Marilene Evans Poet Haiku

The Perfect Canvas - El

THE PERFECT CANVAS

The perfect canvas, the sky.
Gazed, viewed by our naked eyes.
Naturally painted blue
on clear days with added hues.
Pink, orange, red at sunlight.
Black and gold at studded night.
The perfect canvas, the sky. 



8/8/21  Submitted for A Brian Strand
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7/6/21  Elemental Poetry
            Charles Messina

Used:    How Many Syllables

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Sam Kauffman August 9, 2021 at 12:09 PM Back with congratulations for your win with this serene, elemental write Marilene! So fun sky gazing - star gazing with you as you paint your "canvas." Blessings and congratulations. Marilene Evans August 9, 2021 at 2:15 PM Thanks so much, Sam. Have not really been writing lately. I'm a voracious reader of crime/mystery novels and I bought four of them and read them all. Just cannot put the books down, needed to read and finish them.

Alexis Y. July 31, 2021 at 10:39 AM Wow! Marilene, I don't know-how I missed this. I agree the sky is just beautiful. Congratulations on a well-deserved write. Have a great day:-) Alexis Marilene Evans July 31, 2021 at 11:22 AM Thanks, Alexis. Have a great week-end.

Charles Messina July 31, 2021 at 5:15 AM Beautifully written with superb imagery. Very nicely done, Marlene. Congratulations on your win! Charlie Marilene Evans July 31, 2021 at 9:09 AM Thank you for my placement and compliments, Charlie. Have a great week-end.

Christuraj Alex July 31, 2021 at 4:33 AM Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement! Marilene Evans July 31, 2021 at 9:08 AM Thank you. Have a great day.

Sam Kauffman July 7, 2021 at 11:20 AM What a lovely and colorful palette for your canvas in the sky Marilene! This is as gentle as a sunset! Best wishes for the contest. Hope you had a great trip to SLO! Blessings! Marilene Evans July 7, 2021 at 12:33 PM Thanks, Sam. All is quiet now in my front, in my portrait drawing class. Had fun with my daughter touring Paso Robles, Morro Bay, San Luis Obispo and Pismo Beach. My son and his girl friend joined us and then to Santa Maria wine tasting. Drove home and celebrated 4th of July, my fire cracker son turned 41. Have a Blessed Day.