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The Pen Is Greater Than the Sword

He stares at me with a mighty glance, No expression on my face just pen in hand, He slowly begins to grab his sword, I hold my pen firmly as he walk forward, He ask me how can I be so foolish, I’m thinking the same thing but I have to do this, He draw his sword with a smirk on his face, I hold my pen high and a deep breath I take, He leaps my way swings and miss, I circle around him with pen firm in fist, He swings again but I’m to late, His blade taste my blood leaving a cut on my face, He laugh and yell out prepare to die, But I have strength in my heart and fight in my eye, So we charge each other full speed head on, Hitting each other BOOM is the sound dead on, So I guess you want to know who win?………….LETS JUST SAY I WROTE THIS WITH MY PEN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/27/2010 12:43:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed this poem and look forward to reading more of your work. So feed me
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Date: 7/13/2010 12:57:00 PM
Really enjoyed your write and will read more of it. If you have not checked it already please take a look my new poem titled criminals part 3- thank for the read and enjoy your day.
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Date: 7/13/2010 5:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup James. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. On your next to last stanza I think you mean bullcrap right? Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 6:10:00 PM
Very creative and very enjoyable read. Welcome to poetrysoup. Hope to read lots more of your work. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:50:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..
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