The Pen

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"The pen is mightier than the sword"
- In general, I guess that's true
But mine's a lazy blighter;
It treats sloth as a bloody virtue

It's not the liveliest of beasts
It's always at a halt
It likes staring at blank paper
As though that's the thing at fault
 
It lives a charmed sedentary life
Full speed is torpidly inert
It charges around at the pace of a slug
When flat out and alert

My pen possesses zero 'nift' -
I can't fault it for being too nifty
Its' sweet repose is a full-on doze
It thinks saving ink is thrifty

It's scintillatingly steady
So passively at peace
Unchanging in its' inactivity
Like a grazing wildebeest

So languid and so supine
As it munches on my thought
Remaining ever restful
Seeing hibernation as a sport

It's frustratingly calm and fixed
To the point of being plain dull
And that's when it's being lively
It's worse still, when in a lull

But now and then I drag it
Out of its' latent, dormant air
Force it to get some exercise
And treat my thoughts with care

Often it’s quite useless
It's rare for the spark to light -
But when thought and pen work as one
Well, that's the time I write

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/29/2016 12:47:00 PM
Hello David. Enjoyed reading your poem and hearing it at TZ. I can relate to this as my pen does the same. Tony
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Date: 5/26/2016 6:29:00 AM
what a wonderful fun write which I can relate to so much lol - i loved the audio you brought the pen to life - fabulous David a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/26/2016 4:20:00 AM
Well thought and written:) Kudos to your pen:)
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Date: 5/25/2016 7:59:00 PM
I like this poem very much :) You managed to make it so alive (even though there are words such as sloth, sedentary, dormant, etc) by detailed description, personification, and abundance of beautiful words. And the 'conclusion', short and sweet. :)
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