The Pear

The Pear

When you look at me...I'm as a freshly bitten Doyenne Du Comice...

3.2.2017©deborah burch 

Monoku

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Paul Callus

March 11, 2017 at 7:06 AM

Doyenne Du Comice is a sweet, juicy pear, Deborah; who could avoid its temptation!:) #7 Hugs // paul

Deborah Burch

March 11, 2017 at 9:30 AM

;) *blush*

Judy Ball

March 8, 2017 at 4:28 PM

Who doesn't like a nice juicy pear. Well done Deb. God Bless, JB

Deborah Burch

March 8, 2017 at 4:53 PM

Bahahaha!! Judy you made me burst out laughing! Lol! Thank you so much! Hugggs:)

Andrea Dietrich

March 8, 2017 at 3:34 PM

Very interesting image it gives me!! sweet one liner.

Deborah Burch

March 8, 2017 at 4:54 PM

Since we seem to be so much alike I can only imagine;) LOL!! Big Hugggs and thank you!

Charmaine Chircop

March 8, 2017 at 1:53 PM

A yummy monoku sweet Deborah :)

Deborah Burch

March 8, 2017 at 4:55 PM

Thank you Charmaine!! :) you are so kind!! Big Hugggs!!

Chris Green

March 8, 2017 at 1:27 PM

Mmmm, what a delicious Monoku. :) Really nice Deb.

Deborah Burch

March 8, 2017 at 4:56 PM

Lol!! Thank you Chris!! I wasn't sure if it was perhaps too suggestive :0 Hugggs!!

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